Far Gone

[greygoose]

I wrote this for my creative writing class a couple of years ago. I revised it a couple of times and it is probably my favorite piece that I wrote for that class. Whaddya think?

Far Gone


It drowns the simple man
The tide runs in and out
It crashes on the rocks
Splashing out of bounds

Calling someone home
It’s an enticing sight
With waves so strong
And smell of greatness

Against better judgment
Captured in a clear glass
It leaps from resting
Into the eager mouth
Of me, the alcoholic.

ps, if I had known of this site when I wrote this, I would have ended it with the word drunkard.

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[felinamojokitty]

I wrote this for my creative writing class a couple of years ago. I revised it a couple of times and it is probably my favorite piece that I wrote for that class. Whaddya think?

Far Gone


It drowns the simple man
The tide runs in and out
It crashes on the rocks
Splashing out of bounds

Calling someone home
It’s an enticing sight
With waves so strong
And smell of greatness

Against better judgment
Captured in a clear glass
It leaps from resting
Into the eager mouth
Of me, the alcoholic.

ps, if I had known of this site when I wrote this, I would have ended it with the word drunkard.

very nice greygoose..you are more tender than i thought.. the ocean of drunkardness cleanses souls-like the sea and jettys wandering around seagulls


and for the record if i ever opened a chinese or japaneese joint

hell even thai i would name my place 'far gone noodle'

[Resident Asshole]

Wow, GG submitted that for me, that was nice of you man. It seems forever ago that I wrote that.